Delirium
Liying on my bed,
I feel your hands
touching me.
When I walk in the
street,
I can smell you
passing around.
When I look in the
mirror,
I can see you huging
me.
When I finally close
my eyes,
I can feel you with
all my senses.
It feels like time no
exist,
It feels that never
want to end.
But when I open my
eyes,
And my awareness is
tuned up,
Is when I noticed,
That it was just me…
Wow great work!!! I could felt it in my guts
ReplyDeleteI think it lacks the element of details...descriptive details, and some corrections in orthography, but overall is actually beautiful...and could be more by just editing those details. <3
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