Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Delirium





Delirium

Liying on my bed,
I feel your hands touching me.
When I walk in the street,
I can smell you passing around.
When I look in the mirror,
I can see you huging me.
When I finally close my eyes,
I can feel you with all my senses.
It feels like time no exist,
It feels that never want to end.
But when I open my eyes,
And my awareness is tuned up,
Is when I noticed,
That it was just me…

2 comments:

  1. Wow great work!!! I could felt it in my guts

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  2. I think it lacks the element of details...descriptive details, and some corrections in orthography, but overall is actually beautiful...and could be more by just editing those details. <3

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